
“DANA's hero is a bold blue canvas with a hashtag headline and a QR code — brave on mobile, baffling on desktop where nobody scans their own screen. The full-page screenshot reveals massive blank grey sections below the fold that suggest broken content rendering, which is a conversion catastrophe hiding in plain sight.”
Your action plan
Ordered by conversion impact. Click any fix to see the before → after.
Copy rewrites
Ready to useDrop-in replacements for your highest-leverage text. Each rewrite explains the conversion principle behind it.
The killer move
High ImpactAdd an input field where desktop visitors type their Indonesian mobile number and receive an SMS download link instantly — this captures a lead, removes the QR friction barrier, and gives DANA a retargeting asset, all in one interaction that competitors are not doing on their desktop landing pages.
How visitors experience your page
Second-by-second walkthrough.
Health check
8 dimensions, weighted by conversion impact.
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