
“The hero is a full-viewport background image with centered text that buries the primary CTA (Daftar) in the nav while pushing app store buttons mid-page — a classic conversion hierarchy failure. The subheadline has a visible text duplication bug ('merchants online & offline.merchants online & offline') that screams quality control issues to first-time visitors considering trusting you with their financial data.”
Your action plan
Ordered by conversion impact. Click any fix to see the before → after.
Copy rewrites
Ready to useDrop-in replacements for your highest-leverage text. Each rewrite explains the conversion principle behind it.
The killer move
High ImpactReplace the full-bleed centered hero with a two-column layout: left side has headline, subheadline, and a 2-field inline form (phone number + income range) with a 'Cek Kelayakan Saya' CTA; right side keeps the lifestyle image. This converts passive browsers into micro-committed leads and captures intent data — fintech brands using inline eligibility widgets report 30-40% higher qualified lead rates than app-store-only CTAs.
How visitors experience your page
Second-by-second walkthrough.
Health check
8 dimensions, weighted by conversion impact.
Page speed
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