“The H1 is buried mid-page explaining the business model instead of selling destinations or deals — a cardinal sin for a booking engine. The hero search widget competes with a wall of navigation text, and there's zero social proof (no testimonials, no passenger counts, no trust badges) on a page asking strangers to hand over credit card details for flights.”
Your action plan
Ordered by conversion impact. Click any fix to see the before → after.
Copy rewrites
Ready to useDrop-in replacements for your highest-leverage text. Each rewrite explains the conversion principle behind it.
The killer move
High ImpactReplace the blank search widget with a destination grid showing live lowest fares from Buenos Aires (e.g., 'Córdoba desde $X', 'Iguazú desde $Y') — this transforms the hero from a blank form into a price-anchored inspiration engine, reducing the cognitive load of 'where should I go?' while immediately proving the low-cost promise before the visitor has to trust it.
How visitors experience your page
Second-by-second walkthrough.
Health check
8 dimensions, weighted by conversion impact.
Page speed
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