
“The hero headline 'Your property search just got serious' is bold but the cookie modal obliterates the entire right half of the page on first load, burying the search bar — your primary conversion tool. The 'Only With Us' differentiator (24-hour exclusivity over Rightmove/Zoopla) is buried mid-page when it should be the headline, not an afterthought.”
Your action plan
Ordered by conversion impact. Click any fix to see the before → after.
Copy rewrites
Ready to useDrop-in replacements for your highest-leverage text. Each rewrite explains the conversion principle behind it.
The killer move
High ImpactReplace the generic headline with a dynamic element showing properties added in the last 24 hours that are not yet on Rightmove — a live number like '1,247 properties only here right now' would transform the search bar from a commodity input into an urgent, exclusive action that no competitor can replicate.
How visitors experience your page
Second-by-second walkthrough.
Health check
8 dimensions, weighted by conversion impact.
Page speed
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