
“The hero headline 'Tosla cebin, işin ve senin için' is poetic but vague — a first-time visitor cannot tell if this is a bank, a POS provider, or a loyalty app. The above-fold has no CTA button, no product visual clarity, and the cookie banner eats 25% of the viewport on load, burying whatever momentum the page had.”
Your action plan
Ordered by conversion impact. Click any fix to see the before → after.
Copy rewrites
Ready to useDrop-in replacements for your highest-leverage text. Each rewrite explains the conversion principle behind it.
The killer move
High ImpactReplace the static hero with a segmented entry: two large clickable cards — 'Ben bir işletmeyim' and 'Bireysel kullanıcıyım' — that dynamically reveal the relevant product visual and CTA below. This mirrors Stripe's audience-segmentation approach and eliminates the four-button paralysis while personalizing the funnel from the first click.
How visitors experience your page
Second-by-second walkthrough.
Health check
8 dimensions, weighted by conversion impact.
Page speed
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