
“The hero says 'Disclose with confidence' but the CTA says 'Find out more' — a classic case of strong positioning undermined by a commitment-phobic button. The product screenshot below the fold does real work, but the nav is a mega-menu maze that would make a McKinsey consultant weep before they ever hit 'Book a demo.'”
Your action plan
Ordered by conversion impact. Click any fix to see the before → after.
Copy rewrites
Ready to useDrop-in replacements for your highest-leverage text. Each rewrite explains the conversion principle behind it.
The killer move
High ImpactInsert a final conversion block before the footer that leads with a specific time or cost saving — e.g. 'Teams using Atticus cut verification time by X hours per document' — followed by a single 'Book a demo' button. Enterprise buyers who scroll to the bottom are your highest-intent visitors and currently hit a dead end at security specs.
How visitors experience your page
Second-by-second walkthrough.
Health check
8 dimensions, weighted by conversion impact.
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