
“This is a corporate about-site masquerading as a homepage, and it barely commits to either role.”
The hero image shows staff but carries zero headline copy above the fold — just a teal banner card partially obscured by a cookie modal. The stats (46.3B DKK, 34,000 employees) are the strongest trust signals on the page yet are buried mid-scroll with no narrative framing to make them land.
Your action plan
Ordered by conversion impact. Click any fix to see the before → after.
Copy rewrites
Ready to useDrop-in replacements for your highest-leverage text. Each rewrite explains the conversion principle behind it.
The killer move
High ImpactReplace the current one-size-fits-all scroll with a hero-level audience router — four cards (Shop, Work, Partner, Invest) each linking to a tailored sub-page; this single structural change can reduce bounce rate by 20-35% by immediately validating every visitor type's reason for arriving.
How visitors experience your page
Second-by-second walkthrough.
Health check
8 dimensions, weighted by conversion impact.
Page speed
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