
“The hero does the heavy lifting with a clear price anchor and address form, but the Verizon acquisition banner is a conversion grenade — visitors searching 'Starry' see 'joining Verizon' and immediately question whether to bother signing up. The 'without the BS' tagline is undercut by a footnote-laden $30 price that actually starts at $40, eroding the trust it was trying to build.”
Your action plan
Ordered by conversion impact. Click any fix to see the before → after.
Copy rewrites
Ready to useDrop-in replacements for your highest-leverage text. Each rewrite explains the conversion principle behind it.
The killer move
High ImpactIntegrate a city-detection script that pre-populates or confirms the visitor's metro area before they type, showing 'We serve your area' with a green indicator — this single change reduces form abandonment by removing the fear of wasted effort, which is the primary reason high-intent visitors don't complete the address check.
How visitors experience your page
Second-by-second walkthrough.
Health check
8 dimensions, weighted by conversion impact.
Page speed
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