
“Tokopedia's hero banner leads with a compelling 'Gajian Sale' promotion with clear discount numbers, but the page metadata is completely empty — no meta title, no H1, no H2 — which is an SEO catastrophe for Indonesia's largest marketplace. The CLS score of 0.12 and dense below-fold SEO text wall suggest technical debt that undermines an otherwise competent homepage.”
Your action plan
Ordered by conversion impact. Click any fix to see the before → after.
Copy rewrites
Ready to useDrop-in replacements for your highest-leverage text. Each rewrite explains the conversion principle behind it.
The killer move
High ImpactDisplay a real-time or daily-updated counter in the hero area showing transactions completed today (e.g., '2.3 juta transaksi hari ini') — this single element converts brand familiarity into active trust and creates FOMO-driven urgency without requiring a sale event.
How visitors experience your page
Second-by-second walkthrough.
Health check
8 dimensions, weighted by conversion impact.
Page speed
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