
“The hero nails the value prop and price anchor (2,99€) but the single address-search CTA is doing all the conversion heavy lifting with zero urgency or incentive attached. Twenty-two images missing alt text and a duplicated H1 signal a Framer build that prioritized aesthetics over SEO and accessibility — a costly trade-off for a service that lives and dies by local search intent.”
Your action plan
Ordered by conversion impact. Click any fix to see the before → after.
Copy rewrites
Ready to useDrop-in replacements for your highest-leverage text. Each rewrite explains the conversion principle behind it.
The killer move
High ImpactUse IP geolocation to pre-fill the city in the address field and swap in a local proof stat ('Oltre 12.000 spese consegnate a Milano') — this single change collapses the two biggest friction points (does it work here? can I trust it?) into one moment, typically driving 15-25% lift in address-entry completion rates for hyperlocal delivery services.
How visitors experience your page
Second-by-second walkthrough.
Health check
8 dimensions, weighted by conversion impact.
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