
“The hero headline 'Good cars are sold here' is doing the bare minimum — it's a tagline, not a value proposition.”
The search bar sits in the nav rather than dominating the hero, and the red 'Show 28,928 offers' CTA competes visually with the green 'Sell my car' button before a user has even filtered anything meaningful.
Your action plan
Ordered by conversion impact. Click any fix to see the before → after.
Copy rewrites
Ready to useDrop-in replacements for your highest-leverage text. Each rewrite explains the conversion principle behind it.
The killer move
High ImpactUse cookie or account data to show returning visitors a personalized above-fold strip — their saved searches, price drop alerts on favorited cars, and a count of new listings matching their last search. This transforms a generic marketplace homepage into a sticky, high-intent re-engagement tool that dramatically improves return visit conversion rates.
How visitors experience your page
Second-by-second walkthrough.
Health check
8 dimensions, weighted by conversion impact.
Page speed
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